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Logline Critique Session Two Revisited #18

TITLE: Hidden in Shadows
GENRE: Urban fantasy with romance elements

ORIGINAL LOGLINE:

As assassin Lorna hunts for her father's murderer, she struggles to master her newfound shadow power. But enacting her revenge would destroy any chance Lorna has of living a happy life when she falls for a target, leaving Lorna torn between murder and love.

REVISED LOGLINE:

As a paranorm with the ability to create and hide in shadows, assassin Lorna grows closer to avenging her father's death but is torn between duty and love when she falls for her latest target.

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